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Kirby FC: Acrid

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Oh god, I really made a fan character for Kirby. Oh god my poor soul has gone to the Dark Matter side. Actually, if you knew me in the beginning days of DA, you would know I actually already had 5 Kirby OCs. ALL OF WHICH are no longer on DA because they were all so horrible that if I decide to bring them back they are all getting major reboots.

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Name: Acrid DeRotin

Age: Middle age (Does anyone know how age works in the Kirby world? Because I sure as hell don't :,D)

Species: Ghost Knight. (Wiki page: [link])

Alignment: Lawful good. He fights for justice, righteousness, and prosperity. He believes that everyone exists solely for the purpose of improving the lives of the next generation. Any sign of hesitation or hindrance towards the greater good is considered treasonous.

History: Acrid was born in a hum-drum little village that just couldn't seem to get up on its feet. It wasn't a bad life, although everywhere he went there were people who complained about the horrible conditions of the village. They hoped one day that 'The Star Warriors would come in and fix everything.' Acrid started asking about these Star Warriors. In time, Star Warriors became his role model. He wanted to be brave, strong, courageous, and as all around amazing as he thought they were. When he was an adolescent, he received his battle axe from the next-town-overs blacksmith, Anizelli (See Haybane)

Acrids parents and siblings were very against him running around with big weapons, strange woman, and a dream of fighting for impossibilities. Acrid stopped talking to them about it, but they continued to pester him with passive aggressive comments. They thought it was suicide to fight for the greater good when someone would just come along and ruin it anyways. As the years wore on, he grew bitter against them. How could anyone not want to fight for a brighter future? Just because his village seemed doomed didn't mean another village couldn't be saved!

When Acrid was old enough, he joined a group of Galactic Marines who went from planet to planet, killing off any hostile monsters or just fixing up things as well as they could. (Consider it a mixture of a Peace Choir and the GSA) He left, and has never looked back since.

Personality: Acrid is a no nonsense kind of guy. If he is given instructions, he will follow them to the letter. There is no time for goofing around or jokes when there is work to be done. If given a position of authority, he will demand immediate respect. Acrid has a temper which he can keep under control most of the time. His most important trait is his desire to do all around good. Every action he does is based off of the question 'Will this improve something.' If he suspects someone around him is trying to hinder the greater good, he will not hesitate to take immediate action against them. Acrid is not one to show emotions, unless that emotion is either annoyance, indifference, or anger.

Haybane: When Acrid was an adolescent, he decided he wanted to join the Galactic Marines in order to serve the greater good. First, though, he needed to learn how to handle a weapon. He took his life savings, walked an hour to the nearest town, entered the blacksmiths shop, and was horrified to realize weapons were really expensive. Acrid was no good at haggling, but she (the blacksmith) took a shining to Acrid, and made him a deal. If Acrid worked at her shop for six months every other day without pay, then Acrid could have the pick of the lot. He agreed, and six months later, watched as the blacksmith, now his best friend, carefully forged his battle axe. (The blacksmith was shocked to hear a Ghost Knight didn't want a lance and shield. Acrid had taken a liking to the raw power of an axe after she went through each weapon and its specialties) The blacksmith named it Haybane.

It turned out that the blacksmith, named Annizeli, was a retired solider who specialized in axes. She was the one who trained Acrid to use his axe, and by time he was a young adult, he was ready to join The Galactic Marines. He still writes Annizeli to this day.

Zeli: Acrid did not choose to adopt Zeli. She chose Acrid. Much to his displeasure. But over time, a silent pact has formed between them. Acrid feeds Zeli, and Zeli makes sure smaller monsters stay away from Acrid and his squad. (She can't do much against bigger monsters, though.) Acrid decided to name the Scarfy after his best friends. Also, he got annoyed with calling her 'Scarfy' and having twelve wild Scarfies attempt to bite his face open. Zeli often follows Acrid around, trying to get him to smile.

He'll never admit it, but he likes Zeli and hopes she sticks around a bit longer

Weaknesses: He has no way to defend himself from magic attacks. In fact, defense is pretty low for any type of attack. Haybane is a two handed weapon, which will leave himself wide open for attacks if he tries anything too fancy. His temper can also get the better of him, so if you rile him up during a battle, he'll start attacking with less strategy and more frenzied strikes. Acrid has very poor fine motor skills.

Strengths: Acrid has used nothing but a battle axe since the day he got it. He not only fights using the blade, but with the spike as well. He even uses the butt of the handle if he wants to merely knock someone unconscious. When he fights with a clear mind, he can dodge efficiently, and can come up with strategies and attack plans within a moments notice. He is also very physically strong.

Extra:

-He was born a Ghost Knight. He did not die and come back as one. For every ghost related joke or pun you throw at him, that's how many of your limbs he hacks off.

-Acrid is albino (Meaning he is completely white with red eyes)

-When around strangers or underlings, he will use the name White Knight. When around authority or friends, you can call him Acrid.

-Acrid has the appetite of a teenage boy. (Meaning he eats A LOT) The only time you might be able to catch him relaxed is after he's eaten

-The scars he has are minor injuries from battles. He often forgets they're there unless someone asks about them.

-He won't attack woman or unarmed enemies unless they make the first move.

-The reason he doesn't kick Zeli to the curb is because she reminds Acrid of Annizeli. They both love pushing his buttons, but care deeply for the Ghost Knight.

-Star Warriors are his role model and inspiration. Although he has never met one in person. If he did, he would probably very poorly contain his excitement, seeing as they were his childhood heroes as well

IIIIII think that about does it. I plan on making another ref sheet for Annizeli in the distant future.

RPs are open for him! :dummy: That's what he's here for you sillies!
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Blustarpilot's avatar
Now that's a well developed caracter you have made^^! The best is he isn't a puffball like most of the Kirby oc's, but a totaly underrated species QuQ... 
And Zeli.. she's just the most adorrable scarfy I have ever seen x3!!